True Love Rising

© Francisco Guzman 2005

Hey, this poem is kind of a remake of True love (both parts), i hope u liek it.
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I cannot stand it any longer, this pain I now feel
My heart aches for love, a love that can only be cured
If her sincere and kind hands comfort me in my time of need.
She is my purpose, my beloved my cliché

Love is a vast feeling that never ends,
But when I feel I cannot get to her, my heart turns into stone
Then the giant hammer of rejection shatters it into pieces,
only she can repair.
Her dagger of romance cuts through me like a double bladed sword.

She is my ever growing rose,
And I am her passionate smell
She is the glimmering sky,
And I am her moon
She is the vague sunrise,
And I am her rising sun

I am drawn to her grace, and she makes me go wild
As raindrops fall amongst her face,
She wipes them off with her hands of promising love,
Which I wish to hold someday
She is gentler than a summer’s breeze

How can I look into those gorgeous hazel eyes?
And not think about the swirling pool of affection she has brought me into?
Every time I glimpse at her, it wipes out all sense of time
It erases all feelings of a beginning,
And all fear of an end

She is my rainbow,
And I am her color
She is my clock,
And I am her time
And then she's the sun,
And I am her light

Why am I so afraid, so conscious about how I feel?
I have a torment in my heart telling me you'll turn away
But maybe you're afraid like me, to share your feelings
How can I tell her that her beauty has hypnotized me?
Ever since the first day of our encounter

I am feeling so much love, but I want to be loved
It’s like feeling the sun from both sides
Blazing and full of warmth, yet miraculous
True love is what I feel, and I cannot deny
The sun is coming out to warm my soul

She is a cake,
And I am her frosting
She is a tree
And I am her fruit
And then she is a star
And I am her brilliant shine

You may just be one single person to the world
But to one single person you are the world
You have lit my eternal flame,
Which will burn for a lifetime

I didn't make this decision, to be captivated by your spell
My heart made it
That moment seemed to last forever
It’s that golden feeling I feel that I won't forget
Because....

She is a dream,
And I am her thought
She is Bee,
And I am her devastating sting
But most of all she is my love,
And I am her True Love Rising

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