by Megann
That's amazing, really sounds like it should be a well established kids poetry anthology, have u had it published yet?!?!? tis great 5/5 |
by X Irrad
Great poem! I know it's hard to end a poem, but I really think the ending should be drastically changed so as not to break the flow that has been so firmly established in the first 9/10ths of the poem, which, as I said, are really good! |