by Leah20 Feb 7, 2005
category :
Special events /
other poems
He was standing there alone |
That was deep |
Excellent poem! It was so sweet and sad, all at the same time! I really liked the style you used, and how you pointed out at various places in the poem how young the little boy was, yet how much faith he had in God and in the fireman. Great job, keep it up. |
by ScarletHaze
omg that was brilliant! u r such a gr8 writer! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
by katie!
Wow, very good, very poweful well done |
by creasy
WOW! WOW! WOW!! very sad, but that was soo beautifully written!! this poem needs to be a 5! 5! 5! nice choice of words!!..*perfect* keep it up!! :) |