No 1 !

by BabyGurl   Feb 7, 2005


No one hears my tears
no one sees my fears
no one sees the pain i
grieve ! no one sees
the need to save me
from ME! let me be
alone in misery !
thats wat they think
y c ant they help me
sucseed in getting
rid of this painful
Me!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Georgi

    awwwwwwwww gr8 poem xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kit

    It's really good, gurl! I like it when you write like this! 5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Bogie

    Dang!!! BabyGurl I have notice your
    writing is getting real good. Like this
    one blows me away.
    “no one sees the need to save me
    from ME!” To many young people
    have serious issues these days “recognize”
    What you wrote here says if they know
    It’s like “that’s on you” I’m out. Thanks “not”
    Or its “FTW” go ahead do it we don’t care.

    As you can see how much emotion your
    poem got out of me. Well done, excellent.
    Keep up the great write, luv ya! see ya!

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    be strong girl!! God Bless U
    Love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is great...i can really relate to it...keep ur head up and take care...im alwayz here if you wanna talk..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

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