This poem is vary good and beautifuly written. 5/5

Hey, this is a really good moral...keep on writing and take care....you captured it great!! gave it a 5!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

It was good. The rhymes were nice.

excellent job. i love it

Weridly amazing..Lol..Loved it

*Sorry I havn't commented.in awhile..Just haven't been on the site!*

Chris

A powerful message! Well done~Holly

Heather another amazing job...i loved it and it soo true..keep it up and im sorry that i havent been commenting or checking out ur poem but I havent been on this site for awhile and im not gonna be on for awhile but wen i get bk ill make it up to u k gurly...well bye for now and keep on smiling=)

*XoX Sw33ti3*

very good hunz it was great and very true :D
peace

yet another great one