Wen u first asked me out i was in heaven.
i love u more den u'll eva no.
u were my 1st kiss, n my 1st love.
so wen u dumped me i was in hell.
i h8 it every1 around me was so sad 4 me but nufin made sense.y did u dump me?? y is every1 sorry 4 me?? it's not like dey eva care.
so wen u finally asked da question once more i flew all da way bak 2 heaven wid choo in mah eye da whole time.
plz dont eva make me go bak 2 dat horrible hell wifout u.
i'll jst let cha all no dat love is like heaven, but boy it can hurt like hell!!
but it's alwayz worth it in da end.....
PLZ VOTE N COMMENT I PROMISE I'LL DO DA SAME 4 U ALL K CHEERZ XOX
yea that is soooooo true!!!!!!! that's a really good poem and it has a great message behind it great job!!!!! thanks for the comment on my poem twice lol
Nate