Gunshot suicide

by ~*^*~ longing to belong ~*^*~   Feb 7, 2005


Broken heart,
Torn apart,
Thrown upon the ground.

Silent scream,
Violent scene,
The lies and truth are found.

Dying girl,
Thoughts a whirl,
Slumped in her own blood.

Masked figure,
Pulling trigger,
On a life misunderstood.

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  • 19 years ago

    by «_ĀÐdï©+ïØñ¯»

    i saw pictures of this happening within my mind. the poem was great, though sad..

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Aww....girl!! Don't think about killing yourself. It's too depressing anyhow. lol. Good poem though. I haven't seen that style in ages. Charlie, please don't think like that though. I can't really say that this is true yet, but i hope you feel better if you felt like this a while ago!

    Take Care!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by Rashelle

    Wow this is realy good short and sweet well not sweet haha but iknow what i mean.I realy like your stuff
    keep writing

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