Wow this is realy good short and sweet well not sweet haha but iknow what i mean.I realy like your stuff
keep writing

Aww....girl!! Don't think about killing yourself. It's too depressing anyhow. lol. Good poem though. I haven't seen that style in ages. Charlie, please don't think like that though. I can't really say that this is true yet, but i hope you feel better if you felt like this a while ago!

Take Care!

~Sierra

i saw pictures of this happening within my mind. the poem was great, though sad..