Comments : That Final Day

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Awesome hun...i love you, i wish i could make you feel better...you're so amazing <333 xxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • Great job. I loved this part:

    Crying for what
    I've lost, never found
    Things I should have forgot
    And that horrid sound

    Of a scream
    Piercing through my throat
    And my ever real dream
    Of my blood stained suicide note

    The ending was great too. Keep it up, Take care.

    -Cheerfully Cynical