OH MY GOD AMANDA!!! i love this poem!!! people will comment and vote on it cuz its so good... ya dont worry, and keep adding more, ide love to hear more. :)

wow! thats awesome, that poem is really good. your ideas are so well thought out and put across, really good description of it. honestly that is a really good poem and i liked your rhymes, you have used some i wouldnt have thought of and i really like that in poems (gives me ideas! lol) really flows wel throughout. great write, take care,
ellie
xoxo