Could you please go into detail about the way my poem fell apart at the end? I would really appreciate it.
Thanks,
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!!! awesome poem!!! i love it!! and i remember too when sex was dirty. of course, marital sex wasn't dirty, it was sex B4 marriage that was looked down on. our generation is way out of whack in their thinking. we take for granted that pre-marital sex is the same as sex inside marriage. it's not. sex inside a marriage has a whole lot more blessings. plus you don't get std's. unless your spouse has already been diagnosed w/ one.
keep up the good work!!!
~maggie