everything fit perfect, except the line...
"The blood we once shared"
it just kinda threw me off, i mean, i like this poem, but that line kinda kreeped me out. but nice job...

Sorry I wasn't sure if I should add that.
But thanks for telling me that it's supposed to be for the mom's going through a divorce

well okay then, now it makes sence. lol. thanks for my comment too hun.

Wow, this was more amazing than the first one I read. Excellent job!