Wow. You Are Amazing.

WOW!! this is amazing...so many feelingz, and i can relate to this really good!! Keep it up and take care...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Very deep.. i loved it.. crisp language made way for crisp imagery.. the flowing and rhyme were both dead on, never stumbling at all.. you asked if what i write is true, and thats a hard question to answer.. it's totally true to my heart, but some of it is just too abstract to say it's true.. all of it is based on events/feelings/memories i've experienced.. id like to think that this piece isnt based on experience, but i think id be naive in that belief.. its a shame this is a coping method for so many kids.. instead of cutting, write poetry.. it does help.. anyway..

Its confusion driving me now,
there all the same,
Every single one of them,
they're all to blame.

the first "there" should be they're i think.. kinda confusing and doesnt make sense to me otherwise.. alright imma go look at the second ending,.. good read -=D