i love it! an amazing write! i really like the last stanza. wonderful word usage as well!

A beautiful and tender love story. I really reajoyed it...A somewhat different pace for you I think.

Your comment on my poem R.I.P, I have a question you are speechless...Is that a good or a bad thing ha!ha!

Kind regards
Hayley

ok the wow before "im speechless" would tend to steer towards a good thing...But with you I have to ask he!he!
Thanks for always taking time out to read and comment on my work!!

Hayley

Excellent.. but then again, what piece of yours is not?

Keep it up and take care!

God bless you! :)