Wow i love this poems it realy tells your feelins straight forward.
i love it i love all ur poems. i just lost my love.

This has happened to me and I can relate to every heartbreaking line.I'm a sap for poems of love and loss and this one is so beautiful and touching.Technically the rhyme sceme is great and helps the poem flow so smoothly, but it's the emotion and what you say that is the true power behind this.Great piece.