No fairy tale

by Anna   Feb 8, 2005


~i know its long but it would mean a lot to me if you read and comment...please~

its no fairy tale
don’t be mislead
for if it was
it wouldnt end this way

a confused girl
lost in this world
finds her prince
he loves her so
adore her every move
helps her to fly
but their love
she would always deny
she was the perfect girl
he was the perfect guy
they were the perfect couple
in the public eye
yet their love was hidden
he didn't know why
he gave it his all
yet still she would deny
it was her first love
she was too scared to try
after the confusion
the loss and the hurt
he broke it off
tried his best and forgot

now almost a year has past
don’t know why it went by so fast
for i still think of you
your arms around my waist
my head on your shoulder
the heart beat in your chest
the regrets build up
every second I spend
thinking of your love
and the mistakes i made
i wish every day
i could go back to the start
that way i would still be in your heart

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  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    hey....it was good.....you have a talent..
    //.:amanda:.\\

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Great poem i just think you could work a little on the flow and i have a suggestion for this line,
    it wouldnt end this way

    I think you could say rather,
    *It wouldn't have this end.*

    But other then that it was good and sad....Keep it up:) 4*

  • 19 years ago

    by Serena

    wow. really awsome. :) keep on writin, cuz ure incredible!

    ciao,

    *~Serena~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Sw33ti3

    I liked this poem a lot and i can soo relate to it...ur really good so keep it up and thx for ur comment..i much appreciated it..

    *XoX Sw33ti3*