I liked this poem a lot and i can soo relate to it...ur really good so keep it up and thx for ur comment..i much appreciated it..

*XoX Sw33ti3*

wow. really awsome. :) keep on writin, cuz ure incredible!

ciao,

*~Serena~*

Great poem i just think you could work a little on the flow and i have a suggestion for this line,
it wouldnt end this way

I think you could say rather,
*It wouldn't have this end.*

But other then that it was good and sad....Keep it up:) 4*

hey....it was good.....you have a talent..
//.:amanda:.\\