Very nice...You have a wonderful way of expressing yourself.

Very nicely written.And it conveys the love and loss, the missing and wanting, the desire and desperation.I can really relate to this piece, as I'm sure many can.A beautiful poem of love.

I love that poem!! (I'm only 14) But its still kinda hard to express my feelings in a poem. But, I feel I can do it better in a poem than talking to someone. Thats something I've learned to deal with in my own way. And I'm still working on it.

~Shae

Hey I like this poem, but how did you go about getting your poetry copyrighted??