Closer to Good-bye

by Tammy   Feb 8, 2005


I wonder what happened
to the beautiful life
we once shared
I look in your eyes
I see nothing there
I touch your hand
you pull away
I can't live like this
for even one more day
Not a day goes by
when my tears don't flow
sometimes I think
it'd be better if I go
My heart won't let me
because I love you so much
But my head tells me
to just give up
I want to stay
and love you without end
but every time I try
you just hurt me again
Don't you notice
all the times I cry
every tear
brings us closer to good-bye.

© Tammy Lively

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  • 19 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Heartfelt...as Bill Clinton once said, "I feel your pain". Very well done.

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachael

    Tammy, this was a great poem....I've definitely had this experience before, you did a lovely job putting the feelings into words. Thanks for your comment, it's nice to have a connection!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    beautiful poem, but sad. i dont like sad poems much, but this one was neatly written. nice work, 5!