Greatest fear

by sara   Feb 8, 2005


No one care how much i cry.
No one even wonders why.
The intimacy that we use to share,
sadly is no longer there
I feel the pain deep inside my chest
like a knife slicing through my breast
This is a special love that we shared
no other love could be compared
I long for your touch and its no longer here
and that is my greatest fear

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  • 19 years ago

    by mary T

    wow excellent work, So very impressed.. A sad poem indeed but I know exactly how you feel. Im sorry you have to feel that way sis we share the pain I love you girl :*

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    love it! short but still so much emotion...i'm sry though if that really happened...but awsome poem! and thanx so much for commenting on mine it meant alot!
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! so true! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by inaudible confessions

    Nice poem. True story? Because if it is, i'm really sorry. Thanks for commenting on my poem, i really appreciate it. Keep writing.

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