Good. Generally, I thought it was a lovely repitition of former lines, and a good structure overall. But, I'd suggest organizing it a bit better, into individual stanzas instead of one big stanza... but, well done.

really good, flowed so nicely....great work and very creative title *5

love Heather.

Very creative peice. Another 5! I can;t help it, you are going on my favorites. Very nice job! nothing else said

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Wow. Very original subject. I really liked this one. Keep it up.

another great poem, very creative..loved it..keep up your great work..:)

very good keep up the good work

Another good poem.Iv read alot of your stuuf and your a realy good writer
great job