Women

by Daniel J   Feb 8, 2005


Women,
Honest, open and plain,
The only way to speak your mind;
Do to him what is kind,
Do not tag him along, behind.

When he pours his soul to you,
Leaving him at your mercy; --
When he says "I love you,"
Tell him only what you mean,
But do take care with your reply,
Be cautious with his heart,
As you hold it in your hands,
For every sigh,
Every smile and every frown,
Makes or breaks a man.

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© Daniel J 2005
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I'm thinking of making this poem one with "men" - as I had originally intended it. But whatever. It bodes well as two seperate poems too...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    This was awesome. Great job. :)