Drowzy

by Shelby G.   Feb 9, 2005


Standing lonley, with her fears
Her shirt is soaked from all her tears
Back and forth, she begins to sway
Now the floor is were she'll lay
Sleepy, tired, awake no more
Nightmares now walk through the door
She's now sweating, breathing deep
Facing fears within her sleep
Tears now running, in a stream
She's so scared she wants to scream
Rolling, Tossing on the floor
She wishes nightmares to be no more
Unconciouse, She wants to wake
Knowing that all this is fake
Though she's awake she wants to scream
She now knows it's not a dream
She's still swaying left and right
she's just sleepy, she can't fight
Once again, she hits the floor
And faces nightmares, just once more

Copyright ©2005 Shelby Gorsky

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    A pretty good poem. The only thing I would suggest is that the ending, you have as "and faces nightmares, just once more." The poem makes it seem like this has been an ongoing thing, or reoccuring nightmare. To me, the "just once more" part makes it sound like she's only going to be in the nightmare one more time, and then she's out. Maybe I'm crazy, but thats what it seemed to me. Anyway, good poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! it's a great story! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

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