great poem! i love it! it's a great story! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

A pretty good poem. The only thing I would suggest is that the ending, you have as "and faces nightmares, just once more." The poem makes it seem like this has been an ongoing thing, or reoccuring nightmare. To me, the "just once more" part makes it sound like she's only going to be in the nightmare one more time, and then she's out. Maybe I'm crazy, but thats what it seemed to me. Anyway, good poem.