Enchanted love

by xxangelchicxx2000   Feb 9, 2005


Holding your hands
Beside the river bank
Walking under the stars
Wooed by the moon

I was feeling save
By your side
Than the walk ended
When the romantic stance got broken

You looked at me
With sad eyes
You said it’s over
Its time to say god bye

Suddenly I was all alone
In the dark
The love all gone
From my heart

You walked away
And with that my
Enchanted love
Ended~!!~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ nice write, wondering y it had a low rating of '3.3'. keep writing, and don't be sad. if u need, i'll give u my yahoo id so that we can talk
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    Yeah I agree w/ you. Your poem was really great. You just need some spelling check and a little line up then it would be the best. Still keep up the good work!!!=)

  • 19 years ago

    by XღÜñ§€€ñ¯†€ª®§ღX

    I don't know who rated this a 1...but you obviously have no taste....it was a good poem, at least in my opinion.

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