Hidden Promises

by Cory   Feb 9, 2005



I've hidden my promises
the things that go unsaid
my last heartfelt tear
so regretfully shed

This tear falls for you
and vanishes with the rain
along with my morbid thoughts
and all of this unbearable pain..

You see, I have a death wish
one that will come true
because, my love, all my promises
have died along with you...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Oh my gosh!!!! wow this was such a strong and powerful piece, your words were truly haunting and just kept me captivated from start to end. I know exactly how you feel, your poem kind of reminds me of a circumstance in my life. this was one of those great poems where anyone can read it and relate to it from their own perspective!!! great job:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Lauren

    wow this is great work, the wording is very nicely crafted...5/5 all the way!
    Love always,
    Lauren

  • 19 years ago

    by VSambulance

    i really like it. keep it up!

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