i really like it. keep it up!

wow this is great work, the wording is very nicely crafted...5/5 all the way!
Love always,
Lauren

Oh my gosh!!!! wow this was such a strong and powerful piece, your words were truly haunting and just kept me captivated from start to end. I know exactly how you feel, your poem kind of reminds me of a circumstance in my life. this was one of those great poems where anyone can read it and relate to it from their own perspective!!! great job:)