by Jacklyn Feb 9, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The news was no surprise, |
I like it. I like how you repeated At first she'll fade slow, |
by Elyssa
Very orignal.. i liked it! great job! |
by Noelle k.
i thought it was good sad to. but over all great |
by PuRpLeHaYz
powerful poem gav u a 5 |
by Minkus
I think that it's a good poem written with feeling, though I think you could have maybe found a perfect rythym for the repeating lines. That would make it perfedt! 4. |