I think that it's a good poem written with feeling, though I think you could have maybe found a perfect rythym for the repeating lines. That would make it perfedt! 4.

powerful poem gav u a 5
if u hav ne spare time can u cheak out my poem called "ill still luv you"
peace out
xx hayz xx

i thought it was good sad to. but over all great

Very orignal.. i liked it! great job!

I like it. I like how you repeated At first she'll fade slow,
But later it will really show. Great job! >3jess