1st love, not my Last!

by Sierra Rae   Feb 9, 2005


Stop jerking me around
and make up your mind.
Are you hers
or are you mine?
Stop wasting my time,
because I hate these rhymes.

They just flow out...
the pen to the pad;
the tears to the floor;
the blood on the mat;
and you making me sad.
I'm through with this crap.

This is it now,
stop with your fun;
and don't be lying
if you call me Hun.
Our Love is Done.
Set with the sun.

You stand me up,
now I show you out.
You may make fun of me,
or expect me to pout,
but there's no more doubt;
I've taken a new route.

I'm tired of you
being an ass.
you were my first love;
a part of my past;
a name on my cast;
but you won't be my last.

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Good one! Your rhyming worked pretty well again, without making it too forced...and I know a lot of people can relate to this...nicely done.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ nice one, keep up the good work :)
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Mana Lynn

    Hey its mandy, just wanted to say great poem but who is it about?? Dont know

  • 19 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    Thnx Bob! I changed it to set with the sun instead of gone with the sun...good idea. I only used nun because I couldn't think of another rhyme...I don't know how I missed sun!!! Thank you!

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken

    hhhmmm.....i thought things were good between u too...i guess not...i liked this poem but i really didnt get the part about the nun...that confuzzled me....anyway....good job and keep writing! luvs

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