by FTS Miles Feb 9, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Would it confuse you if I explained |
by Pilar
This poem made me think about what's waiting me tomorrow, and tomorrow, and tomorrow...and so on ^^ |
by N J Thornton
The images and intense descriptions in this were amazing. You explained things clearly but also in so much detail. Good job! |
by Amanda Bee
The language you use here is amazing and it completely captured me. I loved the last stanza where you refer to yourself as a heretic tourist. As if you are a foreigner looking into a worped world. Excellent! |
Wow, that was such a great poem. You defidently sound like a more mature writer. I love this piece. >3jess |
That was... magnificent, no, that isn't a powerful enough word. I'm speechless. Excellent poem, one my favorites. Take care... |