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by Tamara Talcott Feb 9, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about death
Life is like spinning in circles, Everything may be blurry, But your fine until u stop. Thats when u fall over And get sick. Thats when the lights go out, And feelings are numb. Thats when the happiness is no longer a choice, But a receipt for your Eternal ending. Visions of your life And what may have been, Spin Above your head Collaborating with your thoughts And dreams You remember every thing You have ever done. And think of those Of which you have Yet to accomplish. The lids of your eyes Creep shut And every thing around u Ceases. It is all over there is NO turning back. The end is coming Blankness seeps Into your mind Slowly filling Your body. From head to toe. The cup is not half empty Nor half full. There is simply Nothing left in the cup. Spinning Blurriness Falling Numbness Creeping shut Blank Empty... The End **Please vote and/or comment I like to know what people think both good and bad...Thanks**
by Alyssa
i hated it sorry
by chibi
i hate how life stops so soon as it begins. at least i can say what i want without people lieing to me all the time. great poem. i can relate to this too.