Perfect World

by Shattered Smile   Feb 9, 2005


If this world or any of us were perfect,there would probably be less or no such thing as cutting or depression.

because we could find a way or make a way to make or have people make ourselves happy.

which would be great because I'm sick of cutting to take away all this pain from everyone around me.

I want to be loved,so then i can be happy and all this depression will go far away. but i need to realize,this isn't a perfect world,not even close.

*please vote and comment,please!! thanks*

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  • 19 years ago

    by DBM

    Hmmm... it's ok, but do you even cut? If you do, I don't mean to sound insensitive, but this poem seems to lack feeling. If you don't cut, it might be best to stick with what you know... not criticizing or anything, just trying to help.

    Your style is still pretty awesome.

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