Comments : With Him

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    --not completly true...just puttin myself in other positions--

  • 19 years ago

    by christina

    it was great hunz

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Well done well done!!! This was a very well written peice! I liked your choice of words and I think this was gold! 5/5 keep it up!
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Awwww... Beautiful Heather --Blessful Wishes to you-- I felt the passionate love:) Keep em coming girl! *5/5*...

    *Lots of Love Sedusha*

  • Very beautiful poem! I know a lot of people can relate.. I really enjoyed these lines:
    Every Kiss, Every Hug,
    I Imagine It's Yours.
    Everytime We Make Love,
    Your Face Is My Mind's Galore
    But it was all very well done:o) Great job! keep on writting^_^
    Shannon

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    AWESOME POEM! I FEEL THE EXACT SAME WAY, GOING THROUGH THAT SAME THING. AWESOME JOB!
    -shannon-