hehe great work Heather!! I really liked this one as I can relate to it quite a bit..the last line was an amazing way to close the poem! I really loved all of it! hehe keep on writting my friend!
Shannon

Hey awesome poem! i really like it! check out mine if you get a chance! thanks!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

thanks i like your poems too!!!!

Your Very Well versed in the way that you write things. I added you to my favorites list because we have a lot in common in our writing. I don't write as much as you do but i do like to write about poems and i do like to read poems.

This was definately one of my more enjoyable peices.

Five/Five.

P.S. Thank you for the commment on my poem.

great poem hunz!!! wonderfull ;-)
peace