Sad poem.....

by Mimi112   Feb 9, 2005


Living day and night
Living a fight
Living a lie
I want to die.

Difficulty to breathe
I can't be at ease.
Surrounded by people...superficial
They are nothing but critical.

Not being able to take it anymore
Talking seems more like a chore...
I want to simply go away
Find my own path, my own way.

Somewhere I'll be smiling and it'll be real
That's the only place I want to be. Deal ?
Please take me far, far from here.
Where I can be free, is it somehow clear ?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Candy

    great poem i think you should add to it ... i think it would be nice.
    <3 mop top

  • 19 years ago

    by Kristin

    what you have so far for the poem is good you need to write a lil more tho i like it so far see if you can come up with some more to it tho