by Gracie Jo
This was really good, Andrea. It flowed so well and the ending was awesome. Great job! :) |
by Taylor
great poem! i love it! this is really sad but so beautiful when there's love! keep it up! |
That was really great and sad=( but love is always true thats the reason why. Still great work!!!=) |
i agree with the above comments the flow is outstanding, the tone enchanting |
cool poem |
by Conner
Fantastic poem! Yet another one of your great poems. I'm sure this one will be one of your future great poems. Keep it up. Take care! |
by Ann Stareyes
Andrea, Beautifully written as always. You have a lot of talent so keep it up. I enjoy your work. lol |
by Minkus
Great job, good rhymes... you are now one of my favorites. Great job! |
by Jacklyn
creative, and sad, and good, keep it up and take care! PLP |
by Victoria
Lovely poem sad and heart warming a great write! |
by Hurtingsoul
this poem was so great ....... oh and thanks for the comments |
awesome poem, great work! 5/5 |