aw.. she dies.... thats so sad. i was hoping for the guy to come on line or talk to her at least.... I liked it..good ending and good beginning...Its so sad... well hope to see u right some more poems soon!

wow! neatly done, beautiful poem. your work was simply amazing, in rhyme, storyline, starting and end; everything is perfect! i even went into tears a lil. i dont believe in suicides :) i believe in love. your poem is amazing, and it sure deserves a 5! no less than that!

take care and keep writing!

Hey Awasome poem!! i loved it!! Its really sad...this guy dose almost the same thing to me...he always asked me to do stuff on cam,,,and i always say no kuz its grose and then he says ok bey...but ya keep it up!

really powerfull great, keep it up xx

Really liked reading it U r very Good!!

So sad!

1 word.....
AWESOME