In the line The thong that pisses me off the most.....was supposed to be the THING that pisses me off the most!!! NOT THONG!!!!!!!! SORRY GUYS!

omgoodness this poem was wonderful as well as the other one and it reminds me of my mother still cuz she always wantin me to talk to her about things but i cant cuz she'd b a biznitch about it lol but n e waaaaz great poem

i REALLY enjoyed with poem because i can relate. it sucks doesnt it? arghhh. moms piss me off. good luck<33 i like how it flowed also. beautiful and funny

haha! thats so cute dude i so feel you on that one..i wish theyd quit but theres really no way to get through to them..at least i havent found away and by your poems you really havent either but good job on your writing