Comments : I wish...dedicated to a "friend"

  • 19 years ago

    by jescelle

    great poem babes!

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    amazing poem, i wish i could end a poem like that. THAT IS HOW i want to end a poem. You have a talent for ending on just the right line.

    That even though I love you
    You don’t even know my name…

    That was sooooooo amazing, i loved it so much.

    I am glad i have you on my favs.

    Five/Five

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    oh just a little note again.

    I wish you knew you much I cared

    I think it is suppose to be

    I wish you knew how much i cared.

    Just thought i would let you know.

    Your a great poet, keep at it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Rylee

    i really like this one it has alot of strength in it good job;)