Please god save my soul

by Laura   Feb 10, 2005


Please God save my soul
keep me from that burning flame
catch me before the deep black hole
my soul's a fire only you can tame

please God forgive my sins
keep me from making the same mistakes
more hard times are about to begin
for you to love me i will do whatever it takes

take these spirits out of my life
help me to do no wrong
let me know not to grab the knife
gotta make my life last long...

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  • 19 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    I was just wondering why you declared so strongly in the Forum that 'there is no God' if you are using him in your poems? not trying to be rude, i just wondered y.

  • 19 years ago

    by no1important

    Brillant write. Really really great poem and i totally understand it. Thanks for the comment. See Ya!

  • 19 years ago

    by Bogie

    Excellent poem, gives great insight
    on a person trying to take their own
    life asking God for help.
    The rhyme and rhythm flow sweet.
    Well done great job. ( o :|

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