Excellent poem, gives great insight
on a person trying to take their own
life asking God for help.
The rhyme and rhythm flow sweet.
Well done great job. ( o :|

Brillant write. Really really great poem and i totally understand it. Thanks for the comment. See Ya!

I was just wondering why you declared so strongly in the Forum that 'there is no God' if you are using him in your poems? not trying to be rude, i just wondered y.