Your mark

by Jacob Perry   Feb 10, 2005


The scars on my arm
remind me of you
the marks left behind
not on my body but my mind
i know hes your god now
I'm just whats last week

i caused it you say
cutting away my dismay
you say its my fault
i look at your arm and see the results
you hate me for being you
for being where you've been

for the one i used to call my love
i shoot down the peace dove
this is war
prepare the troops
and fight to the finish
dead or not
on my mind you'll always be a blemish...

©Jacob

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written peice, the structure and flow are fantastic the coontent deep and clear and the expression strong. overall a fantastic peice

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Nice . . . I enjoyed the rhyme scheme, it was different, original, and still very visible - I like your style :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    I love your poems! You're an AWESOME poet.

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    another beautifully written poem. im sorry this happened to u :( ... anyways, amazing poem.
    Fighter
    -xXx-

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