Comments : Your mark

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    another beautifully written poem. im sorry this happened to u :( ... anyways, amazing poem.
    Fighter
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    I love your poems! You're an AWESOME poet.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Nice . . . I enjoyed the rhyme scheme, it was different, original, and still very visible - I like your style :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well written peice, the structure and flow are fantastic the coontent deep and clear and the expression strong. overall a fantastic peice

    5/5