My Sadistic Valentine

by [Neon/] ©   Feb 10, 2005


Love me deeply,
Valentine,
Hold me as I cry.
Make me believe,
Valentine,
That you will always try.

Blow me kisses,
Valentine,
And tell me,"I love you."
Pull me closer,
Valentine,
Show me that its true.

Grasp my hand,
Valentine,
Squeeze it nice and tight.
Hug me softly,
Valentine,
and kiss me once goodnight.

Whisper lies,
Valentine,
Of how you didn't know.
Tell me straight,
Valentine,
Where did you really go?

Apologize,
Valentine,
and say that you were bad.
Get on your knees,
Valentine,
My love you never had.

Suffer please,
Valentine,
Uncover what is real.
Bleed a little,
Valentine,
To show you actually feel.

~FIN~

the story on this? well.. lets just say i was sitting alone one night, and the idea of Valentine's Day kinda made me upset. so.. there you have it. That is how I came up with "my sadistic valentine."
This is my tribute to V-day, which, oddly enough, is my favorite holiday. Ironic? Quite! considering its usually the most depressing and lonely day of the year for me...
oh boo hoo! I've poured out my feelings! SHAME ON ME! ^_^

Hope you like this. COMMENT AND MAKE MY V-DAY SLIGHTLY BETTER.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Nobrainy_duh

    I really like the flow-ness to this poem. It's really good, and has the unexpected turn/twist that, when pulled of, really makes the poem. Awesome job! peace

  • 19 years ago

    by Dani Ward

    wow, that was and excellent poem, i loved it. i know exactly how you feel, and funny enough, v-day is my favorite holiday, and worst day for me, too. ciao~lyn

  • 19 years ago

    by Lipton

    Interesting. You told me about this one. Quite interesting. Very well written!

    ~Ciao Lipton ^_^

  • 19 years ago

    by It Itty

    Interesting as always (just like you =)...good job, the flow was good and easy to follow. Good job!

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