I trace your body
In the stars highlighted in the sky
Contemplate the universe
But don't really care why
All i need is you by my side
To hear your heart beat
Right here next to mine
Have your hand locked with mine
Feeling your fingertips touch mine
Having your words fill my heart
Having your love fill my life
Being with you making me whole
Having your forever is what I need
Or at least it's what is heaven told
seems as if it took you a while to write this... just based on the fact there is alot of feeling there, and your style changed alot... keep it simple (technique wise) so you don't lose the readers attention
