Another wonderful peice you have here. Great job! if I could give you a 6/5 I definatly would.

thanks for all the comments. it means a lot because ive read most of your stuff as well and i love it. this piece was awesome, i loved the language. (and that one haiku was supposed to be 'this road' :-p ). im gonna read more of your new stuff later b/c i gotta go now. peace.