this one deffently expresses me and a lot of people i known including u! lol

Wow, my friends rated and commented on my poems from my computer from my own name.. lol so it sucks cause it sounds like i said it myself.. but my fav 2 poems i wrote so far are tragedy scene and aspect of life
. read them and honestly let me know what you think

NICE !

hey whats up its brett i thought the poem was awesome keep writing!

I liked the poem a lot. It's very true too, and the flow was different from other poems but it was still good. 5/5 and nothing less.
SatuzKa

I liked this one to. Most adults think like that is true but there are a few who have been there and know what its like to be in your shoes

I think you're a great writer but you need to be careful what comments you leave people as to what happened to the person theyre greiving about..