really good i gave it a 5

Thank you steph

I really like it. your a great writter keep it up.

More than a little disturbing, but I suppose that only makes it all the better considering the message. Very nice.

Aww this poem's so sad. Great write though hun! >3jess

thks you guys...Keep up the great work

wow, this poem is really meaning full, i love it, ur a really gd writer, keep it up! lol

*Michelle*

wow, its so sad, but really meaning full! i love the way you always short but great poems, it has all you need to know in it and it doesn't drag on...no offense to ppl who write long poems.

*Michelle*

thanks guys and you Michelle i lov ur poems too

Haha thank you..----Rachel---

Hey Rachel!
Loved the picture it paints, your family grieving for you.
Great message in the end.
Loved it!
xoxo
Laterz,
Shirlz

Wow i really love this poem, its so sad yet has so much feeling! Well writtin! It's short yet so powerful! Keep it up!! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

Hey this is kinda good,, not ur best but keep at it u will get there,, u have a talent that will get better over time,, keep writing girl,, nice job,, lots of lovin,,
**doz an1c me**
thx for ur comments :-)