You write with emotion, I like that, for that I give you a 5.

This was a good poem and i enjoyed it, it was abit different how you did the change from a good person to a bad person. I know that it was really odd how you did it, the transition wasn't quite what i expected i guess. But still a good poem.

P.S. thank you for your comment on my poem, i always return the favor but due to the over whelming outcry of comments on that poem, it took me a while to get to you, but i always return the favor.